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Question by ToriTorture ?: What do you think … ?
I have a rlyyy gay poem in English i had to do, and I have no idea if its good or not. I SUCK at poetry, so Im expecting bad comments ..
but still, just tell me what you think of it (:
It had to be called ‘I Am From’
and we were talking about our past, and things we used to do and listen to, to part of what we do and listen to now.
[she gave us basically an outline to follow]

I am from duck-duck-goose,
and cartoon tag outside.
From indoor soccer,
and cartwheels in a line.

I am from those little lollipops,
and icecream on a summers day.
From chocolate of all shapes,
and candy in any way.

I am from Avril Lavigne,
in those grade-school years.
From Hawthorne Heights, Alesana,
and even Kill Hannah.

I am from all those piano lessions,
getting every note just right.
And my old black guitar,
What a lovely sight!

I am from visiting my grandparents,
On our yearly trip to Boise.
From my first real trip to Oregon,
and looking out across the sea …

uhmyeah!
haha,
when i was little i was in love with avril
i hate her now.
(:

Best answer:

Answer by marilyn M
I like it!
But cut out the Avril
=vomit=

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